Fictional Metaphysics

My next book is a "fictional metaphysics", based upon my recent Annual Philosophy Lecture in Malta. I take the Malta lecture, and simplify it according to certain principles. Computer analysis says that this is now readable at a very, very low Grade 4. However, I doubt that the concepts are understandable at Grade 4 -- which is to say, I doubt that a Grade 4 pupil would be able to read it for understanding. With this in mind, for quite some time, I have been thinking on how to (further) reduce the level of the concepts. I feel that I may have figured it out now -- and for every chapter of the book. I may be ready for the next phase of simplification.