Metaphysical Upgrades

I set aside January and February of this year to prepare a proposal for literary agents -- then from March until now I presented it to the select few. However, my manuscript didn't stand still during this time. All along, I adjusted it -- one big adjustment fulfilling an agent's request for a full bibliography, another big adjustment following advice from philosopher Dr. Martin Cohen. I ran it through Copyleaks yesterday, and was surprised to see the extent of the upgrades. 5.22% was the bibliography, and (much of) the rest as a result of Dr. Cohen's advice.