New Push

I launched a new push for representation this morning, for my book. It could be a major, months long effort. Most importantly, my manuscript now has 85% stronger style. I changed 37% of it. OBSERVATION: It shows that I correctly identified the weak parts, and that the rest was already strong. The stronger style came about like this:

• Through addressing problems of style
• By introducing low-level concepts, and 

• By deleting sections which seemed to drag.

Counter-intuitively, the weakest of these methods was addressing problems of style. This brought about only a small improvement.