A local printer printed out my newly edited metaphysic recently (pictured). First I gained some impression of the whole of it. Now I am studying the
critique with care, noting first thoughts. Next I shall map out what needs to
be done, with monumental changes first in line, then the detail. OBSERVATION: Being one-fifth through a serious reading of the critique, it is clear that my editor is an intellect to be reckoned with. A very clever man. It is a very valuable critique -- just what I wanted.