Wednesday, August 14, 2019

Noting Impressions

On Monday I printed out my philosophy manuscript together with PhD critique. By now it is quite a fat document. Without touching the text just yet, I am writing down my impressions of the critique. By page 107 today, it is all the need for greater clarity and (my own critique) four out of fourteen chapters in these pages drag. OBSERVATION: I think these chapters drag because my language is not simple enough, and simpler language is of necessity more explanatory.

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